In town it was snowing all over the place.This was a surprise because it only ever snows in Auckland about 3 times a century. All of the cars and house were covered over with snow .When I watched it on tv I was so cold.There was a dog in the snow and his fur was all covered over. He looked cold.
When the hail stones crashed down on the ground they looked like big sprinkles of salt.
All of the people looked like big bulky teddy bears because they were wearing heaps of clothes.
Hi Chloe I like your story about the snow in New Zealand
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe I liked the story that you did but there was some problem in that story. No spaces after the full stops.
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HI CHLOE
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Hi Chloe I read your story about snow you done a good work .You have a good story that made me want to have that story that is good . I hope everyone will like reading your story .
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe I read your story about snow you done a good work .You have a good story that made me want to have that story that is good . I hope everyone will like reading your story .
ReplyDeleteHi CHLOE great work keep it up wowwwwwwwwww.
ReplyDeleteHi chloe I really like your cool story about snow this is sisilia I really like the part when you said the dog was standing in the snow and the snow was going all over the dog and he looked cold.
DeleteAnd I really in joyed reading your story. have a lovly day and goodby