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Friday, February 18, 2011

My Holiday


On Sunday I went to my dad' s house.I had to sleep in a tent. That was the fun part. All of my cousins were there but there was mostly boys. We played lots of games. One of the games we played was Army Guard. It starts like the house is in the middle and then you run around the house and try and get your flag back. After that all of the kids went home. I had go to bed but the boys stayed because they live here with their dad. My Dad went to bed too.

In the morning I woke up and had some toast and watched T.V. After that we played around, and then we were going to a party. All the kids there had a race in tens. I had to go home.

14 comments:

  1. Hi Chloe, I am a student at the University of South Alabama and I have been assigned to read your blog post this week. Wow, sounds like you really had a good time at your dad's house. It also sounds like this was the first time you slept in a tent. I think it is very cool that your teacher is teaching you about so much technology and how to share your stories.

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  2. Hi my old friend i really liked your story.I liked the way you explained how to play army guard.
    Love Anamei

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  3. hi chloe i like the you have done are good work but you could make it more interring but thats good from mele

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  4. Hi Chloe what are you doing
    That was a really good story that you wrote.
    I liked how you used punctuation and interesting words too okay bye see you tomorrow...i have alot more to say.

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  5. hi Chloe. i liked your pincher and your witting about sleeping in a tent out side that is so scary was it scary sleeping out side in a tent.

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  6. hi chole I like your story about you going to your dads house keep it up

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  7. Chloe, Wow you got to sleep in a tent I haven't slept in a tent before. I think it would be exciting to sleep in a tent.

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  8. Hi Chloe I liked your story and your picture I have slept in a tent with my cousins before ,it was very scary and it was mostly girls sleeping in my tent. That was a very nice story.

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  9. hi chole i really like your story about you going to your dads house.

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  10. I like the fun thing you did I hope I was there

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  11. Hi Chloe
    What a interesting story you wrote. I wish I was there to. I love your picture. You are so tellinted.

    KEEP IT UP!!
    From one of your friends Quziyah.

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  12. Dear Chloe it is shanika i like the soery

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  13. Hi clo, awesome picture, how bout you do us one off you and your brother. Love mummy xo.

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  14. Hi Chloe

    What a nice story you have there Chloe I really like
    your beautiful story about in the holiday when you
    were sleeping in the tent and when your cousins came
    over to sleep.

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