Wednesday, September 28, 2011

humpback whale

Approaching to the hump back whale there was no signs of life but then it blew out with its blow hole and saw that it was alive.They were thinking, “Why is it not moving?”

They saw that her tale was stuck in a net. They went closer and closer .The whale was scared as we were coming because she was thinking that something was going to happen to her.

Michael started to cut the net. But when they started cutting the net the whale was going deeper under the water.That was not good because the net was going down with her.Suddenly she came back up.

After that one of the men got a small knife and started to set the whale free by cutting the net fast.The whale was to stronger to keep still.

As soon as it was free it was going in and out of the water and started to flip its tale to show that it was happy . by Chloe T


  1. Hello chloe I read your writing about the humpack whale it was the best writing I ever read in your blog and you have done a good hard work putting a humpack whale on your blog with your writing . I really like your writing because it was intresting to read .

  2. Hi Chloe I just read your story about the humpback whale
    it was interesting and like your paragraphs.

  3. Hi Chloe I really like your story about the Hump Back Whale it was a really sad story But it was finally free.I really like your detail writing it made it more interesting.

  4. Hi Chloe I really like your interesting Paragraphs But Lucky Micheal Fishboach saved him that was so sad

    Like your story From Raeleen.

  5. Hi Chloe,

    My name is Deena and I am a student from the University of South Alabama in EDM310, in America. I read your blog about the humpback whale, and I really enjoyed your story! I am glad that the whale was finally freed and was okay. You described the story very well and made it interesting. Great job!


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