Monday, March 4, 2013

The Day Every One Disappeared

This morning we all completed our first writing sample for 2013.I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 mins that we were given so that throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my learning writing I Will post  my goals from this soon.

Today At School it was really interesting because I had seen everyone disappearing from the class room.So At School I had been talking to my friends and then I had went back to work then I looked up and sarona was gone.Then I had tryed to talk to my friends but they wont talk back.I had turned around to say something to the people behind  me then they had disappeared.Every thing was really weird today.

I had went back to work and I keeped on looking up so I could see were everyone was going but nothing happen I was thinking that some people went somewhere for a test.So then I had went back to work wondering if every was disppearing or not .Then I looked up and everyone was gone..I dash out of my class room to look at all the other class rooms and they all disappeared to

.I was looking around my hole School for Everyone  then I was getting scared that something might of happen to everyone.Because everyone was gone the teachers were gone my friends were gone and everyone else but not me.Then I went back to class to see if anyone came back and they didn’t. I was yelled for everyone for ages I was thinking of going home But I didnt I just went to my class room and waited for everyone to come back.

Then I screamed then all of a sudden I was on my table screaming and everyone was back and I was thinking was I dreaming or was I awake.Then I had told my friends all about what happen and they called me crazy.

1 comment:

  1. Cool story chloe but before you post stuff on your blog remember to check your spelling but you story was really awesome.


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