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Thursday, February 28, 2013

Show not Tell


With the sun bearing down on me I felt like melting like an ice cream on a cone in the sun, drip by drip. Throughout the day I was getting really tired from the heat. I felt completely exhausted and had sweat dripping on the right side of my face.

By Taeshell & Chloe

2 comments:

  1. Hello Chloe
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  2. Hello Chloe

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